First draft feedback

Once everyone had completed a rough draft of their trailers we all watched each others films in lesson to give feedback on what we liked and what we thought they could improve on.

After viewing our film we got feed back from our class mates on what they thought went well:
- They liked the soundtracks over the trailer and felt that they worked well to fit the genre, also the pace of it and the crescendo at the end.
- They said that they liked the animated intertitles during the trailer which helps narrate it as we don't use much dialogue in the trailer to keep it mysterious. 
- They liked the pace of the editing with the quick cuts as it made it feel like a psychological thriller.

Then these were the criticisms:
- The overall trailer looked like a film opening.
- They wanted us to add more diegetic sound
- Add more footage to make the main character Owen look more aggressive and controlling.

After receiving the feed back we have since gone back to make changes to adding more diegetic sound but we didn't want to add too much as we felt it kept it mysterious and that the intertitles narrated it well, we are have made our footage of Owen look more controlling and added extra footage to help this and tried to correct our trailer from looking too much like a film opening.