We pitched our film trailer presentation to the class who gave feedback. Some of the feedback we got was that they were good ideas and that they could easily understand the narrative if they were to watch it. They also said that the conventions that we would use would be fitting to the thriller genre.
Some of the things we need to improve on is on furthering our ideas to include more sub plots which would make it multi-stranded. Things like interaction with pressure from parents and becoming an adult. This is so the audience doesn't get bored following just one plot.
You have clearly thought about suitable locations and can explain how they will be used in your film. These offer a good range to complement the plot. You explain in detail how you will appeal to your target audience and how the certificate of 15 is appropriate. You also show good understanding of trailer conventions and how you will include them. You give some examples of sounds but this area needs to be developed with more detail.
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